Nop, not quite good
As you suggested, I watched and analized both of your "movies" and I get the same conclution...... you can't animate or draw...... is just still pictures fading to the rhythm,
also you didn't make a mix of even put something different to the song.... I mean sure the pictures were cool for the memories... but thats all.... thats not work, you have to make an effort at least once
Sorry